Writing Instructions: Evaluate the writing sample that follows. Write a Revision
Evaluate the writing sample that follows. Write a Revision Strategies Essay where you will:
Evaluate and address the strengths and weaknesses
Examine whether, in its context, the sample succeeds in its purpose
Determine the pattern of mistakes in grammar, punctuation, spelling, usage, etc.
Give examples of these errors from the sample
Address any problems that the writer needs to take into account in the revision
Propose specific changes to improve the essay and its organization.