Please see my attached LopesWrite feedback and implement these changes as you ar
Please see my attached LopesWrite feedback and implement these
changes as you are working on your final draft. This will ensure that you earn
the highest grade possible. Please let me know if you have any questions 🙂
Please do the following in
completing the final draft of your essay:
your expository essay using the feedback received from your instructor on
your outline and first draft.
the media piece The Writing Process to help
you refine and finalize your essay.
the rubric for this assignment to ensure you have completed all necessary
components of your essay.
final draft should be at least 750-1,000 words.
the following before submitting your final essay:
· Read your paper aloud (to yourself or someone else) to “hear”
issues with your grammar and sentence structure.
· Polish the issues found by smoothing out your language.
· Run spellcheck and grammar check (as a backup) before submitting the final draft. Make any
necessary changes to address spelling or grammar issues.
· Properly cite your sources both in-text and in the References
section at the end of your paper.
(The Reference Page is the last
page of your paper and should ONLY contain references. If you cited the work in
the paper; the reference needs to be included. If you did not use the reference
in your paper, then do not include the reference.)
· Make sure that the final draft does not contain
any of the instructors embedded feedback from your first draft. These comments
should have been corrected and the comment should be deleted. Please contact
your instructor if you have questions.
Prepare this assignment
according to the guidelines found in the APA Style Guide, located in
Student Success Center.
the Final Draft Rubric to help you make sure all elements is present in your
this is NOT the same rubric that was used in the First Draft. This
assignment uses a rubric. Please review the rubric prior to beginning the
assignment to become familiar with the expectations for successful
completion. Submit the completed Final
Draft to LopesWrite and review your report BEFORE submitting to your
instructor. Make sure your LopesWrite score and essay are ready to be submitted BEFORE you select the “Final Submit” option.
Submit the completed
assignment to the final assignment dropbox by the end of Topic 6 (Sunday, by
11:59pm, Arizona Time).
Topic: Three Ways Bullying Can Negatively Impact Children Subtopics:
Aggression, Depression, Eating Disorders Thesis: Eating disorders, aggressive
behaviors and depression caused from bullying can
negatively impact children.
LINK TO FIRST DRAFT—
FILE TYPE : Word Doc
LINK TO INSTRUCTOR FEEDBACK RUBRIC—
FILE TYPE: Excel
LINK TO FINAL DRAFT RUBRIC—
FILE TYPE: Excel