edit my paper with the comments given: I really like your topic! Under your thes
edit my paper with the comments given:
I really like your topic!
Under your thesis statement, the second sentence I think you are missing a word. “Drug courts help support people with alcohol and substance-related problems are treatment care. ”
1) I know it is listed up above but maybe include the source of the data here as well.
2) Your data seems very comprehensive and I think you should have no problem with it.
Maybe list the years that you are specifically looking in Section 2.
6) You mention the total people enrolled and then list everyone excluded. Maybe after list the number that actually took part in the survey. If I did my math right I think it is 2424.
Question: For your data, is there a certain area or state that it is from? If it is from a certain state/region, you may want to mention where the drug treatment centers were that the data came from.
Overall, I think you did a really good job explaining each section in detail. Good luck with your research!