Thesis statement: Being inform about parkinson, it is essential for the patient
Being inform about parkinson, it is essential for the patient to keep in mind the risk factors, symptoms and the possible treatments the can help to live with condition.
I need the introduction:
Main idea #1 Risk Factors
Supporting ideas: family history
Main idea # 2: Symptoms
Supporting ideas: shaking
Lack of facial expression
Main Idea # 3: Treatments
Supporting ideas: Physiotherapy
Deep brain stimulation
Parkinson is an awful sickness. It has his own risk factors, symptoms and posible treatment, that the patient must overcome in order to deal with the best way.
I tried to start doing it but I couldn’t, I send you the instructions, the teacher tells me that it has to hve 5 paragraphs of 8 lines each.